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Thursday, August 03, 2006

ALL MY KREW: SEASON 1

 

PART I   - meet FADAF the innocent, slightly-pathetic, obsessive-compolsive, lovelorn artist. meet ABID the insesitive, emo try-hard jerk. and of course meet RAJTIN the overlooked friend. 

PART II  - FADAF asks ABID out, owner of Earth Apples MALEXS is introduced along with her Child Laborer Children and ALLYSON

PART III  - ALLYSON performs, LEDISSA is introduced, ABID is a whore, FADAF is heart-broken and porn music plays all awhile in the background.

ESBAH PRESENTS - Guest writer Esbah's take on a very special All My Krew

PART IV  - the SNOW JAM: FADAF gets angry (you won't like her when she get's agry..especially if you're ledissa) and CHEE gets wasted..again

PART V  - MALEXS' KIDS are british (..so..can they here the baby?), RAJTIN smokes, and ABID has an epiphany.

PART VI  - ABID is trapped with ALLYSON and FADAF and RAJTIN get matching subpeonas.

PART VII  - CHRISTINA's gone, FADAF is a hoochie and ABID the emo-boy-wonder falls inlove.

PART VIII  - MALEXS is a gut-whore, RAJTIN isn't so friendly.


Tuesday, July 04, 2006

PART VII: the lost episode

More non-existant than the parents on this soap, so is All My Krew

*theme music*   

***

"hey, uh, Allyson?" abid started nervously

"yeah?"

"there's uh..something I want to tuh!" the lights flickered  on. the escalator thrust forward.

"Abid! we're moving! oh this is so great!!" Allyson was so excited she even hugged Abid (which got him excited because..)

"I love you." Allyson let go, causing  abid to tumble down a few steps.

"What? you've only just met me" Allyson was a bit scared. she made it up to the top of the escalator.

"but that's the thing. I just know." He was almost to the top with Allyson. "So how about it.. will you go out with me Allyson?" abid asked escalating closer, still.

"oh abid. I'm so sorry but..I'm a lesbian."

"WHA? AHHHH" Abid fell backwards, rolling down the escalator. at the bottom "What?! But I-I how could you?!"

"I was so sure I mentioned this earlier.." Allyson shrugged. Abid speechless, stormed out of the mall, (in a rather girl-like fashion) tears and mascara rolling down his emo cheeks. He couldn't help but thinking if only he hadn't let his emo guard down.

kaaaaaaarrr mmaaa!

****

"Whereare we going?" fadaf asked as she followed him to his car. He only smiled at her. If only she weren't so drunk.

****

Alone at the bar for the second time tonight, Rajtin sat drinking whiskey. She removed her cell from her purse and called Chrawla. Busy signal. shit. She still hadn't even found a laywer for the hearing.

"Lawyer eh?" said the waitress as she put another glass of whiskey in front of Rajtin. "I'm a lawyer. Really cheap too."

"Really? That's great cause I need a lawyer for tomm- wait I did say anything about a laywer. I was just thinking that."

"Oh. well okay, nevermind then" The waittress turned on her heel.

"WAIT! no! I could still use you're help."

"Here's my card."

Lésbiotchos. Laywer. Pimp. Calvin Klein Model. 555-DONT-SUE

"My friends call me Esbi  for short. Just gimme a call"

*****

"we're here" he told Fadaf.

"This is only Rajtin's house." Fadaf said rubbing her eyes. He opened the car door for her and escorted her to into the house with Rajtin's keys.

"Your friend told me to bring you here seeing as your completly..well.."

"shit-faced?" she giggled

"hehe. yeah. let's go in." He escorted fadaf into the house. no one was home. "she told me you're sleeping in the basement."

*****

okaaaay, this is where I get lazy. I'm just trying to wrap this up and start a new season quick times so, here are some snip-its of the good parts.

FADAF                                      
- the basement was lit only with candles. uh-oh.

- and suddenly she couldn't take it anymore. she took him right there on the air hockey table.

- the sun poured in from the tiny basement window luminating fadaf's black-but-actually-brown hair. she slept peacefully under her clothes. Rajtin hovered over her. He was gone.
      "Waaaaake up, sunshine" Rajtin whispered sweetly. she frowned. Fadaf didn't even stir. Rajtin poked her. nothing. a little harder. still nothing. rajtin grabbed a single hair off fadaf's head and plucked it violently.
      "son of a -- Raj?" Rajtin only smiled.
      " i really didn't think you'd do it. I thought you were waaay too good. little goody fadaf. the sweet one. the sweet one with the scholarship and the talent." rajtin spat acidicly. "everything i've ever wanted. but you have something I don't have. do know what it is?" Fadaf was confused and very hung over. "what? what are you talking about?"
      "AIDS fadaffy. don't sleep with random guys you whore."

i never realized how bad this was until now.

THE NEXT DAY

-  "Late Mrs. Fadaf? 
    "I'm sorry your honour, car trouble. But if you'll allow, I am ready to present."
    "go for it."
    "The truth of the matter, is your honour, Rajtin put me up to the enitre thing." Esbi's jaw hit the courtroom floor, Judge Haffenpooper raised his suspiciosly well-groomed eyebows, but all Rajtin did was laugh.

MALEXS                                      
-   "Listen Alexs. I know about your past. I have Christina. and if you don't listen carefully, it's gonna get real up in this bitch."
     Malexs was scared. who is this? how does he know? "Who are you? How do you know?"
     "Just follow my instructions carefully and nothing bad will happen to you're precious Christina."
     "Why are you doing this?!" asked Malexs, nearly screaming.
     "A long time ago, you said you loved me. but then..then you.. you.."
     "I what?!" Malexs shouted into the reciever.
     "You ate my guts." what the hell? malexs thought. the stranger continued. "You said you loved me, then you ate my guts. i was in the hospital for so many years, waiting for many organ transplants." the stranger began to cry.

more later.


Sunday, March 12, 2006

PART VI

More successful than OPERATION: SAVE THE TUNA so is All My Krew

*theme music*


     Reasonably small, NewDramasville regardlessly relies on the local electric company run by Mr. Moneybags. All of NewDramavilles is powered by Gimeem Ore Moneybags' Hydroelectric Plant of Love. And if you were to visit this plant (as one had earlier this night) climb over the numerous stairs and look out the window to see huge turbines (as one had as the stars were mimicked in still water). After a few moments of aesthetics, you would then climb even more flights of stairs. Then more. Then even more. Then you would give up and take the elevator completely eliminating the mysteriousness of the situation (as one very out of shape had as it was nearing midnight) But one thing that is you would not have done that someone else had was pull the huge red lever inside of the main control room which automatically turned off the turbines running the entire city. 

well hopefully you didn't.

***

Justice is served pretty quickly in such a small town. So Fadaf and Rajtin weren't so surprised when they had each received a subpoena for tomorrow in their mailboxes.

Fadaf read and re-read the letter several times. She bit her lip. what would my parents say when they got back from there 6th honeymoon? she re-read the subpoena once more and walked sulkily back to her house.

***

"she's gone!" malexs sobbed. "she hates me and I couldn't even apologize."
"well you were pretty cruel. immean honestly, what was with the tequila and freak-out?" jimmy patted his mother's back soothing her.

"I was just a little edgy..I missed an appointment earlier." Malexs sobbed into her hands.

The phone rang. No one usually called Earth Apples from the business line. as a matter of fact, the phone in question could not receive incoming calls. Both Malexs and Jimmy looked at the phone as it rang for the third time.

***

DAY 1

I'm so hungry. what I wouldn't give for a taco. cell phone has run out of batteries. Must drop emo routine until I am rescued. Must learn to live off the land. Become familiar with the creatures. damn. I'm so thin. need food. even my sister's jeans are starting to feel lose on me now. and they were my favourite pair.

I want Mr. Teddyweddykins.

***

Fadaf had called her best friend for support. Only to find out that she too, had been bitch-slapped with a subpoena.

"We're going to court in the morning. possibly to jail. so I saw we live it up. get loaded and have a blast whatd'ya say?" Fadaf wasn't sure. she had only ever drunk alcohol at new years parties with her friends parents. Besides, what if she got into some sort of adult situation?

please grow up now.

"well I.." but Fadaf didn't even finish.
"Fantastic! I'll pick you up. wear something hot." And Rajtin hung up. Fadaf sighed.  Why do I always go along with whatever she says. whatever anyone says.. Fadaf walked over to her closet and opened it. She only owned jeans and sweaters.

***

DAY 2

have resorted to talking to girl whom I am trapped with. She seems okay. likes some pretty good bands. Perhaps I won't kill and eat her. Perhaps. Have moved up two steps so I can hear her better.

***

Malexs and Jimmy looked at each other. Malexs picked up the phone carefully.

"h-hello?" no one answered. the dial tone sounded. Malexs looked at Jimmy. "no one was there." Jimmy shrugged.

" I bet this is all just part of some prank cooked up by Christina. All this just so you would feel bad."  Malexs considered Jimmy's words. "You haveta be tough mom." The phone rang again but it was still off the receiver. this made Malexs and Jimmy jump.

***

Chrawla had made it a habit to head to the bar right after work. the things she sees at the hospital.. she just needed to forget them some how.

Or maybe she just liked getting piss drunk.

She was now drinking straight from a whiskey bottle. 

***

"I can't believe you only own jeans and sweaters, that's gotta say something about you" said Rajtin throwing clothes in Fadaf's bathroom. As Fadaf's luck would have it, Rajtin brought her something short to wear depite her sad wardrobe. She was now in the bathroom dead surprised at what her best friend who she thought was so much like her had in her wardrobe. More like a whore's boudoir.
"I am not wearing this." She said to the mirror. Rajtin heard her anyway.
"Live a little before you can't live at all! you only get two sets of clothes in jail you know." Rajtin now, laying the peer pressure on a little thick.

Fadaf looked at the tshirt-skirt combo. her arms and legs were exposed. she felt like such a slut.

****

By the time Rajtin talked Fadaf into wearing what she wanted, it was 6.00 and getting dark. They left Fadaf's house. Two tarts on the town. Rajtin first took Fadaf to Wayshud 69 where she ordered them both two pitchers of peach schnapps each. Rajtin complaining of wasting drinks and poor kids and Africa got Fadaf to Drink the entire pitcher. she thought she was doing her uptight friend a favour afterall. Fadaf, feeling the depression from the booze thought back to that winter day where she finally lucked up the courage to ask a certain someone to the snow jam.

"What are you? 15..16?" look kid.." was what he said. Fadaf brushed a small tear from her face.

***

DAY 4

feel so dirty. clothes have become tattered. v. good for maximum emo affect. but mustn't worry about that now. I'm getting bored. When I get bored I get even sulkier. There's absolutely nothing to do in the dark. In an empty building. with some random girl. who seems kinda cool.

and funny.

and nice.

and pretty.

oh shit.

****

 From then, Fadaf seemed to let loose and enjoy herself a bit. she laughed danced and flirted with guys twice her age, twice her size, twice out of her league and in some cases not even guys. They hopped from club to club. each one of her flings begging her not to go. But Fadaf just smiled maybe gave a little wink and left. One could easily been envious of someone so popular as was Rajtin's case. So when Fadaf's speech got slurred, and hiccoughs grew more frequent Rajtin did nothing to stop her from drinking more and more.

Maybe she was out of control, but who cares when your young and having fun. It was getting late and Rajtin was considering going home. Sitting at a bar while your best friend is making an ass of herself and  yet still getting more attention isn't how Rajtin wanted to 'live-it-up.'

***

Malexs put the phone to her face.

"Whadda you want?" she sneered into the phone
"Who is this?" replied a woman. oops.
"uh..this is Malexs of Earth Apples.. who is this"
"Oh..wrong number sorry.." the line made clicking noises.
"oh uh, could you hold on a sec, someone's on the other line" Malexs pressed flash on the hand piece. Jimmy crept closer to his mom so he could her the conversation. "hello?" Malexs said casually.

"hello Malexs. guess who? I know who you are and I have something you want malxs. or should I say Alexs?"

***

"Let's go home!" Rajtin shouted over the music. She had just pushed her way through the swarm of guys crowding Fadaf.
"You go! I'll catch up" Fadaf turned her attention back to her newest victim.
"I mean it! Let's go!" Fadaf just shook her head. Rajtin she felt someone tap her shoulder. she turned around finding a random tall, dark and hansom man.
"Hi!" she fluttered her eyelashes.
"Hi!" he returned charmingly. Rajtin swooned until "Hey, do think I could get in there, I want to talk to Fadaf." Rajtin's eyes turned to slits. she considered a good-old fashioned storm-out but instead "Do you think I could talk to you for a bit first?"

after a few minutes of conversation. the man whispered something in Fadaf's ear and she followed him to the back exit.

***

DAY 5

Advances on Allyson = failure. Must use my patent sextacular-emo-smile of death. which hopefully will not kill her. Like last time. Lest we forget.

***

really cranked this one out. not much time to write one nowadays, vair busy. please don't throw things at me. r


Friday, February 10, 2006

PART V

More Transfer Courses than Crazy Councilor Broads deserve, so is All My Krew

*theme music*

     Undoubtedly the roughest, butchest region in New Dramasville, the red light district is crammed with all the crazies and psycoes. The cops are lazy and crooked and no wonder. More gangs than one could count are based in the red light district. Prostitutes roam the streets hitting on the ex-cons. not to mention grandmothers and the little children on there way from school. The skies are always dreary regardless of the other districts and gunshots can always be heard. 
     If you visited anywhere in New Dramasville and then came to the red light district you would wonder how could it be so close to the rest of peaceful, cheery New Dramasville. Although many landmarks separate the red light district, one in particular is an extremely large mansion. Normally, the driveway would be empty, and the lights off (other than a suspicious red light that illuminated from the upstairs) however today all of the lights were on. The driveway was full of police cars and ambulances. And there was a near-dead girl on inside.

Ledissa reacted instantly of course. Abid after her, let out a disturbingly high-pitched 'oh my word,' and fainted. Fadaf didn't know what to do. the two of them at her feet. She didn't remember actually stabbing Ledissa but she remembered alot of blood. And the sound Ledissa made when the glass penetrated her skin. Fadaf remembered it was a good sound. There was so much blood on her hands. Fadaf wandered the mansion until she found a telephone which she use used to call the police. She calmly told them that some one had been hurt without feeling any pity at all. The ambulance had taken Ledissa and Abid on a stretcher. And that was it. This is exactly what she told the police 4 hours later at the police station.

Fadaf, Abid (after nurses assured there was nothing wrong with him that they could fix) and Rajtin had been taken into police custody. The cops had taken in Rajtin because her phone number was found on Fadaf's cell phone before the crime. The police had taken them into separate rooms for questioning.

****

Rajtin had left in such a hurry. Something about Chrawla was now alone. At a bar. Now Chrawla's cell rang. It was the hospital.

"dios mio." Chrawla knocked back another shot glass, picked up her bag and strolled - or rather staggered - outside to get a taxi.

****

When the police had released Abid because he would only draw pictures, he went back to the hospital to check on Ledissa.

"How is she doc?" Abid asked a doctor accompanied by a nurse coming out of the ward.
"I thought I told you to stop calling me that" she said impatiently. "She's not good. I'm afraid that Ledissa is in.." *sit on edge of seat waiting anticipatively* "a coma."
Abid's gasp was cut short. he fainted again.
"Nurse, I need some whiskey STAT."
"But Dr. Rawlma, what about the boy?"
"who? oh leave him, the cleaning lady will get him."

A coma on a soapopera?! show of  hands; who saw that coming?

****

Earth Apples usually closed at 10.30PM so when Jimmy had just flipped the last chair over on the last table he was relieved that it was 11.14. he was ahead of schedule. Allyson hadn't left since her music drove everyone out of the Glovorian café.

"I did awesome today! no one even spoke while I played" said a cheery Allyson. No one was there to speak. Allyson spun around on her stool which was right up to the bar where Malexs cleaned a mug with a rag. (Is that the same mug from 4 hours ago?)

"Yeah, it was brilliant. really..er.. sumfing else auntie Allyson.." Little Jimmy rolled his eyes and went into the back where Christina was refilling Coffee canisters. Allyson kicked of from the stool, spinning madly. fireplaces, bookshelves, tables swrled hypnotically around her. the stool began to slow down as it began to face the front door. Allyson completely dazed. she snapped out of it just in time to see a dark figure at the door. not some random stranger merely walking by, an actual figure just standing there. Allyson pushed her glasses up the bridge of her nose. she had to be seeing things. the figure was gone. Probably only my imagination.

"..so..I was thinking ..maybe I could play again..tomorrow?" Allyson asked slyly. There was a loud crash. "Just think about it, I've gotta run." said Allyson eyeing the clock. If I'm playing again tomorrow, I'm gonna need some valve oil for Ronald. Ronald was Allyson's Trumpet "See you tomorrow!" Allyson leapt of the stool and ran out of the Glovorian café

"`OLY SHIT!" rang Christina's voice from the back room. Malexs ran pass the doors marked 'employees only' to see what had happened.

***

"Miss, could you put that out?" Rajtin took another drag on her cigarette.
"I have the right to remain silent." she said before sticking the cigarette into her mouth.
"um..okay now getting back to the questions, where were you when recieved the phone call in question?" the detective asked her.
"I was at jo'momma's house." Rajtin replied coolly.
"could you just answer the question please miss?" Rajin blew smoke in his face.
"I thought I did." she smiled sweetly.
"Exactly what are you rebelling against?" the detective asked, now loosing his gentle demeanor. rajtin took a long drag on her cigarette, thinking about the cop's question.
"What d'you got?"

****

Abid woke up to someone vacuuming him with a nozzle. the hospital lighting dim and the visitor's ward was near-empty. Abid got up. He couldn't help thinking about what a mess his life was. The only person that ever loved him was crazy, the only person he's ever admired was a comatose, and he couldn't get the bloodstains out of his favourite my chemical romance gun + gun shirt.

There was only one thing that could cheer him up now. Pocky. Abid left the hospital quickly hoping he could make it to Pocky Palace before the mall closed.

He found parking quickly and jogged to the escalator. most of the stores were already closed, but he continued upstairs anyway. at the foot of the escalator he saw Allyson taking her time stepping onto an escalator step. Abid, desperate pushed her, pretending it was accidental. he was halfway up the escalator when all the lights in the mall went out. he heard Allyson scream. The light flickered back on, but the escalator wasn't moving any more. they were trapped.

***

"My Emu Milk! my precious emu milk!!" Malexs was frantic. "How could you spill it you..you.." increasing with rage, Malexs gestured to the smashed glass and 2L of emu milk on the floor.Malexs, Jimmy and Christina were in Malexs' private alcohol cupboard whic was in fact, a room. considerably larger than the back room.

"it was an accident. I'm sorry!" said Christina looking sincere.

"That's it! I got the emu' milk back when I was..was.." not even Jimmy nor Christina knew of Malexs' past. she couldn't blow her cover now.. "..on a..gameshow!!" All eyes were on malexs.

"What the 'ell kinda lie is tha'?" Christina questioned. silly girl, never question a raging drunk. Malexs eyes turned to slits. she took the nearest bottle of ready-made Tequila-Mockingbird and smashed it.

"okay..I think you may be overreacting just a lot malexs."Jimmy warned. "Its one thing to shout, but to smash a poor, helpless bottle of tequila.." she shook her head. "you're completely out of order."

Malexs freaked out. "I'm not out of order! You're out of order! The whole freakin' system's outta order! You want the truth? You want the truth? You can't handle the truth! 'Cause when you reach over and stick your hand into a pile of goo that used to be your best friend's face! You'll know what to do!"

"What the hell are you talking about?! you just pasted bits from famous arguments together!!" Chrsitina, now reaching her breaking point.

 "— forget it Christina — it's Chinatown!" Malexs finished. Chrisitna let out a long frustrated scream.

"I'm sick of this stupid café! I'm sick of you!! I ..I hate"

The lights flickered on once more. Christina was gone.

***

'OMGOMGOMG' we're trapped! Abid was pacing on the escalator in circles.
'hey calm down kid! we'll be fine. I bet the lights will be back any second.' Allyson consoled. The lights flickered out again. Abid and Allyson screamed. For some reason, Abid's scream was higher pitched than Allyson's.

***

************************************

this one's hella long son. I reckon it MAY be the last one before I leave. x
-- reika


NOTE: as you may be able to tell scene 1 was dedicated to my dear, dear  PATCHES whom I haven't seen for years..or was it this morning. ..which ever sounds believable.

PART IV

More 50s than Reika's report card, so is All My Krew

*theme music*

     New Dramasville's most exciting winter event was easily the annual Snow Jam. It was started by the town's board of recreation members commemorate reika day; the fifth holiest day of the year. Each year the Snow Jam is held in the city's second largest dance hall: the Patches' Clandestine Quarters Matyrdom Dance Hall

  and every year the recreational board chooses a group of random townspeople to plan the entire event. This is considered an honour as well as chance to be known as the best party planner in town. Planners go all out with impressive Ice sculptures, lavish golden decor, and live performances from famous artists and bands. each jam is louder, crazier and more fun than the last.

..and yet some how this year doesn't seem as promising.

"Gosh, I'm so tired" whined Tristen as he hung the one and only snowflake decoration in Patches Matyrdom hall.
"I hope everyone likes the cd I bought for the party." replied Christen, Tristen's long-lost identical twin sister. "anyway I think we're done. the snow jam starts in" she looked at her watch which read 7:06PM."less than an hour."

*****

The silence of the room and the awkwardness of the situation made created immeasurable tension. Fadaf could only look back and forth from Abid and Ledissa.
"Abid..who the fuck is this and why is she in my house?" Fadaf looked at Abid expecting him to have a perfectly acceptable explanation. It couldn't have been what she thought..right?

Damn is she naive.

"Well you see, what it is is.." Abid began. Fuck. fuck. fuck. "Um this is um..er...?"
"Fadaf you asshole." she finished for him. silent tears were streaming down her cheeks but her expression upheld dignity that no one had seen before. Abid's stomach lurched.
"Right. and she - fadaf - is..a friend of mine." he continued lamely. He couldn't do this anymore. How to be a Jerkass: An Emo Kid's Guide to Being a Jerk never said being an ass was so difficult.

Try page one, you idiot.

****

Many of whom had walked into the Patches' Clandestine Quarters Matyrdom Dance Hall at 8PM expecting to find the party of the season were not amused to find a paper snowflake on the wall, a cd player, and a bag of half-eaten chips. After a quick tar and feathering of the twin party planners, the Snow Jam crowd retreated to Wayshud 69. The local transvestite bar.

On the most southern point of New Dramavilles upper west side there was an anything but humble bar. A brothel in the 19th century, Wayshud 69 was started by a group of gypsies who moved to New Dramasville with hopes of a new honest, life full of lots of STD infected transvestites whom loitered in the front of the club. Pimps included.

The floors are made of glass and underneath is a pond full of various species of fish. lights were flashing, the music were infectious and men, women, and god knows-what danced like mad shirtless.

At the bar sat Chrawla Rawlma celebrating her 26th. Chrawla or CheeChee, as she is called by her friends, is very easy to like. she always says the right thing and although she is a doctor, she's never afraid to be silly. A lot of people care about her which is probably not a good idea because the one thing wrong with Chrawla was her.. shall we say addictive personality.

" Gimme another one Samuel"
" I told jou! My name ees Sanchez" said the bar owner (Many believe he has a uncanny similarity to Earth Apples owner Malexs. The only difference was Sanchez's thick hearty moustache). " And no..jou've had enough. I call you taxi." Sanchez continued. Chrawla threw her shot glass at the wall dangerously close to Sanchez's head.

" Ay! ¡consiga esta perra alcohólica lejos de mí!!"
" It okay! It's okay! I've got her" Rajtin shouted over Sanchez's shrieks and cursing. Rajtin steered Chrawla to the other side of the bar.
" Are you trying to get us kicked out of another bar?!"
" Calm down I'm not even drunk yet." the strange thing about Chrawla's alcoholism was that even though she had only two drinks, she'd get crazy. Demanding more and more."Besides, you wouldn't even be in here if it weren't for me. Your underage!" although Chrawla was 9 years older then Rajtin, they became friends when Rajtin volunteered at the Hospital where Chrawla interns.
"Yeah, well just watch it alright! anyway, I have a surprise for you upstairs"

****

Somewhere in New Dramasville was a bar called The Morning After. It was a normal, comfortably pleasant coffe house until about 6.30PM when it became a hardcore bar serving the best in Glovorian and International drinks. Like many citizens of New Dramasville, the bar owner was Glovorian but she was never seen at the bar.

A girl sitting at the bar drinking her 4th pitcher of piña coloda hopped off her stool. She carried a large bag carrying gear. She was heading to the power plant.

*****

He let out a dramatic sigh. "Look, I stood Fadaf up because I thought it would be funny. I came here instead." he told Ledissa. Ledissa, who was clearly was unaffected by the remorse and outrage in the room plainly looked back at Abid.

****

Rajtin's cell suddenly rang. She flipped it open. What the hell?

****

"What the fuck makes you think I care about that" she gestured to Fadaf. "I'm trying to run a business Abid, incase you haven't noticed. Now if you'd be so kind to take emo-wannabe ass out of my bed and take you runt with you." A girl of very little patience, Ledissa is. She got out of the bed, walked to the other side and pulled Abid from where he was sitting-up. Abid fell out of the bed onto all fours. He was scrambling for his clothes. (Reika: Virrr-ginnn!)

Runt? fadaf had had it. She walks in on..and then he..4 years!..stood up?! it just didn't compute. Fadaf looked around wildly. Her eyes settled on the pile of broken glass. Ledissa was now shooing them out of her bedroom door. Fadaf picked up a shard of broken glass. A gave Ledissa one final look before she jammed the glass in the side of her neck.

****

am so fucking disappointed. damn. damn. damn and merde x3. that could have been 100 x 10³ better. I NEED to know what you think. comments anyone? x
-- reika



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